She is very detailed and descriptive in her personal narrative.
2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give
your partner that will help his/her paper improve?
What could help her narrative become better, is using my sister and I instead of me and my sister, that is basically it
Imagery
4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?\
When her and her sister begin to get chased
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